Comments on: Deposits by Susan Gibb

By: Gay Degani

Gay Degani — Fri, 26 Feb 2010 21:04:56 +0000

Great piece. I’m an old Twilight Zone fan myself and it’s a shame Rod Serling can’t get his hands on this to put it on TV. Oh wait. Maybe he can. Contact that lab in California. STAT. Good good story.

By: susan

susan — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 12:23:57 +0000

Thank you, gentlemen! I loved “The Outer Limits” and was raised on Rod Serling’s “Twilight Zone” and Alfred Hitchcock before that. (You’ll see a touch of them in my Valentine story on Fictionaut today.) Arthur–not a liberal, nor a conservative but a liberally-minded conservative I guess. And yes, insurance is a prickly pear in my skivvies though we pay part of our premiums to the tune of thousands a year and never do seem to come out even.

By: michael j. solender

michael j. solender — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 18:13:35 +0000

and to think, i’ve been trashing all my unwanted jetsam and flotsam..great flash here.

By: Arthur

Arthur — Fri, 12 Feb 2010 16:18:56 +0000

Delicious fiction. Or is it fiction at all!? Hazar has a good sense of where this one works as a screenplay. Outer Limits is just right. Brilliantly conceived, Susan. And the best part is how the insurance company kicked back the bills.True story, right? A coy cry for Universal Health Care! Oh, you liberal you.

By: Hazar Worth

Hazar Worth — Tue, 09 Feb 2010 13:07:36 +0000

Such a tale of putting one’s eggs into the bicylce basket of the deaf and blind, smirking rider called ‘Fate’, felt like an ideal that could have been used by that under-rated show from the ’50’s ‘The Outer Limits’ Susan. I am glad that this piece found its place at Metazen.ca.